Tuesday, December 27, 2005

Spirit's Dancing


Somewhere I just know

our spirits are dancing
in the wind along an emerald
pathway where the sun glistens
on the water within my reach are
wishes of your hand in mine a prelude
to the two that become one

18 comments:

S.L. Corsua said...

Oh my, this one I enjoy reading aloud over and over. Love the fluidity effected by the line-breaks. ^_^

shyloh's poetry said...

Soulless said...

Oh my, this one I enjoy reading aloud over and over. Love the fluidity effected by the line-breaks. ^_^


Hello Dear,

Thank you so much. Hope you had a nice Christmas.

Alex said...

And everything is orchestrated by The Source

shyloh's poetry said...

Alex said...

And everything is orchestrated by The Source


Yes indeed it is. Even when I think I am ha.

Alex said...

I'm quite sure The Source has you as one of the major "helpers".

Troy Dunn said...

Gorgeous, not unlike the author.

shyloh's poetry said...

Alex said...

I'm quite sure The Source has you as one of the major "helpers".


Ha perhaps, perhaps.

shyloh's poetry said...

Troy Dunn said...

Gorgeous, not unlike the author.


Thank you troy.

*blushing*

Neo said...

Shy -Pretty! You have such a way with words. You can recite poetry to me anytime. ;)

Hey thanks for checking out that song. I'm glad you enjoyed!

shyloh's poetry said...

NEO said...

Shy -Pretty! You have such a way with words. You can recite poetry to me anytime. ;)

Hey thanks for checking out that song. I'm glad you enjoyed!


You are so very welcome. And what I say comes from my heart. I love the song and the way you sang it. So nice.

Sing to me NEO.. (smile)

shyloh's poetry said...

Gangadhar said...

Oh..Shy!! wonderful lines here..I just loved them...

take care
Ganga


Oh ganga there you are. Good to see you and thank you.

Sudeep said...

Nice lines... the flow is gud :)

Happy New Year to u... c u in next year..

Huggzzzz.. :)

Φ said...

Here they are
right before my eyes
in the same wind trudging
the emerald pathway under sepia sun
the spirits transmorgify
as our corporeal self
in entwined existence


New year to you shyloh :)

Neo said...

Shy -PS. Thanks :)

shyloh's poetry said...

Gangadhar said...

You're still awake? Go and sleep,dear Shy..

take care
gud night


Ganga yes last night was so long ha. Night. Well now morning ha.

shyloh's poetry said...

Sudeep said...

Nice lines... the flow is gud :)

Happy New Year to u... c u in next year..

Huggzzzz.. :)


sudeep hey, how are you darlin? good to see you.

Happy New years to you as well.

shyloh's poetry said...

arun tatikonda said...

good poem.

9:26 AM


WOW thank you for coming by and commenting.

shyloh's poetry said...

NEO said...

Shy -PS. Thanks :)


You are welcome.