Tuesday, January 10, 2006

Dancing Silhouette


Dancing Silhouette



Dancing Silhouette

On a beautiful summers night
A dancing silhouette
performs by the glowing sunset

Her hair long and flowing, and a smile upon her face
her form sways with such elegance and grace

On any given night; you could glance upon the hill
the wind whispers lowly, the river is calm and quiet
but the dancing silhouette is never still

She wasn't looking for fame, fortune
nor to make for herself a name
she just loves to put on a show..
while dancing in the sunsets glow

The music starts to wind down
the performance comes to and end
as she lifts off her top hat, and bows low
the crowd starts to cheer and applaud
for the dancing silhouette... shyloh

16 comments:

Sudeep said...

*APPLAUSE*

The last rhyming line id fab :))

Sudeep said...

Correction: is* fab :))

Alex said...

A perfect vision illuminated by the last dancing embers of the sunset.

Gangadhar said...

wow,Shy..wow...this really hits me..very well written here!! i loved the way you started in the first couple lines, it grabbed my attention, and the descirptions are wonderful!!! GREAT job!!!

Ganga

Rick said...

Cold wind blows bare trees.
The leaves are all raked.
Snowflakes dancing.

shyloh said...

sudeep

*APPLAUSE*

The last rhyming line id fab :))

Sudeep said...

Correction: is* fab :))


Oh thank you honey.

shyloh said...

Alex said...

A perfect vision illuminated by the last dancing embers of the sunset.


Very nice alex. Thank you dear one

shyloh said...

Gangadhar said...

wow,Shy..wow...this really hits me..very well written here!! i loved the way you started in the first couple lines, it grabbed my attention, and the descirptions are wonderful!!! GREAT job!!!

Ganga

WOW and thank you ganga for such an awesome response. Making me blush.

shyloh said...

Rick said...

Cold wind blows bare trees.
The leaves are all raked.
Snowflakes dancing.

hello Rick. Good to see you again. And what beauty awaits within your soul. That is perfect!

Anonymous Poet said...

Can I dance with you?

shyloh said...

Anonymous Poet said...

Can I dance with you?


Yes you may dance with me.

Anonymous Poet said...

Just tell me when and where to show up!

: )

Lorena said...

there is something about dancing that really gives you this natural high. i envy dancers like this.

shyloh said...

Anonymous Poet said...

Just tell me when and where to show up!

: )


Ummm very tempting.

shyloh said...

Lorena said...

there is something about dancing that really gives you this natural high. i envy dancers like this.


I know.. Thanks again dear.

sincerelyreader said...

when I read postings like this I am inspired and know I am one of the dancers!