Monday, September 17, 2007

Open Window


...Open Window...




Every night I have an open window


I listen to the whispers from the wind


after awhile the wind dies down


Did I fail to mention


I just wanted your attention


the open window was an invitation


come on in


copyright 2004 by shyloh


5 comments:

Takeshi said...

Your name is beautiful. Is it not of Hebrew origin meaning something like 'His Gift' or 'His Present'?

Stumbled across your portal of delight via Erina's site. I was directed ther by Hawk my friedn. A truly pleasant oasis to stop. I will be adding you to my roll. It will certainly add some charm and elegance to my "Inspirational" Roll (Worthy of One's Time!)

I will return very soon.

Befor I forget, nice post!

Mata ne...

shyloh's poetry said...

Takeshi said...

Your name is beautiful. Is it not of Hebrew origin meaning something like 'His Gift' or 'His Present'?

Stumbled across your portal of delight via Erina's site. I was directed ther by Hawk my friedn. A truly pleasant oasis to stop. I will be adding you to my roll. It will certainly add some charm and elegance to my "Inspirational" Roll (Worthy of One's Time!)

I will return very soon.

Befor I forget, nice post!

Mata ne...


I visited your place and love the zen music. And the poetry is totally awesome. Thank you. Would love to give you a link.

Namaste'

Alex said...

Some wonderful things need no wind at all. They are just there and that's it!!!!

Rolando said...

ok now I'm in and I don't want to leave :)

Anonymous said...

This is a beautiful poem, Shyloh. I like how the speaker extends such a thoughtful welcome.