Monday, September 03, 2007

Your Words


Your Words


Your words are addictive
a magnetic pull on my heart
they fill me with ecstasy
in sweet dreams

Your breath echos through
my very soul, timeless
it lifts my mind to places I
have never traveled before

Eerie silence is gone
words of summer colors
paint a new world
beyond imagination

A declaration of love
from your mouth
to my heart

copyright 2005 by shyloh




8 comments:

Alex said...

Sometimes the Force running, organizing, directing some Lives downright amazes me. It’s one thing to talk about it in the abstract and another thing to experience it full bore. Several days ago was one of those times. I rewrote The Perfect Stranger and added it to the possible theme for your project since I don’t want to interfere with it / you. All I did was take dictation for about ½ hour because I’m clueless about poetry. It’s all under Perhaps????? In many ways it sums everything up from the beginning.. "Your Words" was the perfect reply and leaves me stunned which ain’t hard.

shyloh's poetry said...

Alex said...

Sometimes the Force running, organizing, directing some Lives downright amazes me. It’s one thing to talk about it in the abstract and another thing to experience it full bore. Several days ago was one of those times. I rewrote The Perfect Stranger and added it to the possible theme for your project since I don’t want to interfere with it / you. All I did was take dictation for about ½ hour because I’m clueless about poetry. It’s all under Perhaps????? In many ways it sums everything up from the beginning.. "Your Words" was the perfect reply and leaves me stunned which ain’t hard.


haha alex I will see it thank you.
Hope you had a great weekend. Now it is back to work.. WHAAA, time flies when on is having fun!

Alex said...

I thought I’d better be serious for a moment. The revised "The Perfect Stranger" is a fun poem, but in many ways a deadly serious one. It sums up T. L. succinctly and mentions most of the things that happens to an individual when you are stricken with T. L.. You don’t have to say anything about it because it came down through the Source with me as just an instrument for its’ reproduction on this side of the line. It’s between her and you. The Source says that any poem you see on those pages that I’ve written / revised are yours to use Scot Free so I’m not to interfere. I’ve seen that the Source doesn’t think like you and I and she is quite prepared to do things that would make your hair curl. She also seems to be deeply interested in your project. Just thought I’d let you know. I sense it’s going to be a busy year with lots of . WHAAA’s for both of us. Yes indeedy time does fly when one is having fun and the T. L. doesn’t slow anything down either!!!!

jOolian said...

delicioso magnifica mz shyloh...yummi words that perk inner visions...splendor.
Thank you once again for you poetic thrust'sations....

i must ask, when you sign/or say: Namaste'... what does that mean ??
inquisitive i be,
gotta dig the rawwwk'n hard shyloh... ~julian

franx said...

Becareful to use words sometimes make other people hurt..I wonder that you are the great writer and many fantastic Poetry on your blog have deep meaning

shyloh's poetry said...

jOolian said...

delicioso magnifica mz shyloh...yummi words that perk inner visions...splendor.
Thank you once again for you poetic thrust'sations....

i must ask, when you sign/or say: Namaste'... what does that mean ??
inquisitive i be,
gotta dig the rawwwk'n hard shyloh... ~julian


Awee thank you for reading. Now you know what Namaste' means.

So Namaste'

shyloh's poetry said...

Becareful to use words sometimes make other people hurt..I wonder that you are the great writer and many fantastic Poetry on your blog have deep meaning

4:02 AM


Indeed, cause NO harm unto another. I write how I feel always. I guess it is my Being ha.

Rolando said...

Have you ever fallen in love with someone just by reading their words.

I know I'm fascinated by some of the blogs I read and their beautiful writers.

Some take you to another place just as you've described.