The animal Kingdom
Mice running in the fields
where berries grow for them to eat
running along the stalks and stems
creeping silently on little feet
avoiding snakes in the dry heat
In the animal kingdom
everything is a tasty treat
they must always be on guard
for everything smells deceit
nervously watching every move
their strength, they try to prove
Animals of every kind
to survive they must take a chance
they are all victims of circumstance
no such thing as coexistence
An alligator hiding under swamp slime
catches its prey with its powerful jaw
It's all death in due time
and it will not withdraw
Eerie at night, no different by day
birds take flight when they see
hyenas stalking their prey
they may be laughing, but it isn't play
who will be next on the food chain
always the weakest and the lame
who will lose and who will gain
an endless cycle that will continue to remain
31 comments:
its great to see a wide variety of subjects that trigger the poet in u.. also amazing the way u catch the metaphor to life in ur work here...
Me.. said...
its great to see a wide variety of subjects that trigger the poet in u.. also amazing the way u catch the metaphor to life in ur work here...
Thank you your comments mean a lot to me. Very special!
Aloha
What I find interesting, is that when The Second Lady organized this universe she used a basic template that applied to everyone / everything including events.
Shy - Sounds like visiting the city. ;)
Great writing.
Peace & Hugs,
- Neo
NEO said...
Shy - Sounds like visiting the city. ;)
Great writing.
Peace & Hugs,
- Neo
Ahhhh indeed..
"who will be next on the food chain
always the weakest and the lame
who will lose and who will gain
an endless cycle that will continue to remain" Very true...
amazing rhyme! you write delightful pomes :)
gr8 lines like always..
liked the last 4 lines the most.. very true
Your poetic journey to the ecosystem is very nice...
At 6:21 AM, Alex You said...
What I find interesting, is that when The Second Lady organized this universe she used a basic template that applied to everyone / everything including events.
Hi Alex, I guess there is no difference haha. Everything is the same.
Vanathi said...
"who will be next on the food chain
always the weakest and the lame
who will lose and who will gain
an endless cycle that will continue to remain" Very true...
Hello vanathi. Welcome and I think it is true. Even humans do it ha.
death said...
amazing rhyme! you write delightful pomes :)
Thank you death. It was pretty simple watching the Animal Kingdom haha. An amazing show.
Sudeep said...
gr8 lines like always..
liked the last 4 lines the most.. very true
Hello Sudeep. Thank you dear.
Jolvin Rodrigues said...
Your poetic journey to the ecosystem is very nice...
Oh thank you Jolvin Rodrigues
welcome..
Hey you're welcome Shyloh - Check out my poetry site http://mipoemas.blogspot.com/ when you have the time :)
My first visit here...
Came thru top 100 bloggers n the word "poetry" pulled me here.
I write poems too n hv displayed a few on my blog "Poetriez"
Will b coming back here as hv added u in my favs :)
GBU
Arti
Maybe so, but occasionally you meet some really fabulous people that you automatically put on a pedestal (like man, uh, someting lik’ yore po-tree pick -ture)
Jolvin Rodrigues said...
Hey you're welcome Shyloh - Check out my poetry site http://mipoemas.blogspot.com/ when you have the time :)
Oh I sure will dear. Thank you again.
Akansha said...
My first visit here...
Came thru top 100 bloggers n the word "poetry" pulled me here.
I write poems too n hv displayed a few on my blog "Poetriez"
Will b coming back here as hv added u in my favs :)
GBU
Arti
Wow than you. That makes me smile ha. I will visit you ok.
Alex said...
Maybe so, but occasionally you meet some really fabulous people that you automatically put on a pedestal (like man, uh, someting lik’ yore po-tree pick -ture)
Oh alex. The love of my life. Ha. Love the po/tree pick-ture huh haha.
You make me lol.
there is no peace and love for each other in the animal kingdom. diversity only means a variety of meat for the meal.
Pirate said...
there is no peace and love for each other in the animal kingdom. diversity only means a variety of meat for the meal.
That is so true. A tasty treat all around.
And who is it that will eat us humans? Ouselves, I'm afraid.
Ken
chench said...
And who is it that will eat us humans? Ouselves, I'm afraid.
Ken
I'll eat a tree first haha. Or perhaps dirt. Me can't eat a people dear.
reader said...
Such sweet sentiments!
thank you!
Hello reader thank you for stopping by.
Everything in life has a rhythm. And the beat goes on!!!
Bassho's frog went plop!
and never heard from again.
A snapping turtle
At 6:24 AM, Alex You said...
Everything in life has a rhythm. And the beat goes on!!!
Oh my drummer boy!!
Rick said...
Bassho's frog went plop!
and never heard from again.
A snapping turtle
Hey Rick, how ya be?
Haha the food chain.
Hope you are doing ok! {{{hugs}}}
You don't exactly miss a "beat" either!!!
Post a Comment